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    10/4/2009

    谈论 中秋小令

     看到shunan写了小令,我也手痒写一篇,不过为啥最后写成了这么幽怨的一首,用了入声词似乎平仄不太工整,懒得改了,仍然贴上……

    青衫湿/人月圆

    秋來卻憶平林月,畫角漸吹寒。
    去國千里,持花對酒,半晌貪歡。

    年年此夜,照人離亂,辜負青衫。
    江湖廿歲,遲來有恨,俱付無端。

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    中秋小令
    己丑中秋,舍中弄琴,忽觉月明。因往阶前梧桐树下,流连焉。所得《人月圆》两篇者,同依[四支]韵,或可作上下阕观,拆之则各唐突矣。

    冰壶乍泻秋之半,皎皎正相宜。风流自在,非因柳唱,不以苏词。
    年年此约,山长水远,来照佳期。 泠泠素影,人间一夜,多少相思。

    容颜不为人尘改,造化使相随。无心盈缺,多情空寄,终古何知?
    四方尽望,或驰聚兴,或遣离悲。无言只向,梧桐叶里,碧影稍移。



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    小心 wangwrote:
    恩,很怨妇。。。
    Oct. 5
    Yao Linwrote:
    “去国”改成“故园”?
    Oct. 5
    Ji Liwrote:
    文盲来坐沙发……
    Oct. 4

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